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Trainyard

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treble

trainyards are for clearing space, the trains

tremble at

making it worth our while to move in

the hierarchy of

where our junctions juxtapose

daffodils and diffidence

greet with a sandbag-bible

boxcar and baggage packed

for friends of trains

towards dry counties and wet markets

are friends

of the movement of elongated contrail-tracks

of mine
The idea behind this piece of literature requires some explanation, but is really quite simple. It works like a trainyard. The lines can be read (downward) in almost any order you can think of. I'm not saying to rearrange the lines. I'm saying if you skip a few of them while reading the sentence should continue as a new "train of thought."

Here are two favorites of mine:

I
trainyards are for clearing space, the trains
where our junctions juxtapose
for dry counties and wet markets
are friends
of the movement of elongated contrails


II
tremble at
making it worth our while to move in
the hierarchy of
any friends of trains

Thanks to ~nawkaman who prompted me to expand on the previous version of the poem, which was a Bitlet.

Trainyard © 2012 Nic Swaner
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pearwood's avatar
For friends of trains are friends of mine.
My last three or so posts are of friends of trains, or maybe just on trains.