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Shelter

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The wind is heaving in cloudbursts,
urging me forward with pelvic gusts
towards local storefronts coerced

                    to acquiesce with the storm front.
                    My breath bends inwards in outbursts:
                    gimme shelter or gimme comfort.

I let the thought whirl and disperse;
the hearsay after the hearse click-clunks
with the wind heaving in cloudbursts,

                    the six lanes of traffic slow to confront
                    the November burial. It is unrehearsed
                    to acquiesce with the storm front

or funeral procession. Both are observed
with perversion: what is in the front?
Toward local storefronts, coerced

                    cellar doors are opened for someone
                    whose words are heard alike, whether
                    gimme shelter or gimme comfort.

The breeze will emerge, immerse,
Indulge, and inhale in selfish thrusts—
the wind is heaving cloudbursts

                    and I am lunglike and overcome
                    with the brisk whistles of a dirge.
                    I acquiesce with the storm front,

braced headlong and headfirst
in three of six lanes slowed to a hum.
To ward locals, storefronts coerce

                    'we're open' signage to turn because
                    vacancy merges to vagrancy in weather,
                    so deny me shelter or gimme comfort.

The wind is heaving in cloudbursts
towards local storefronts coerced
to acquiesce with the storm front:
gimme shelter or gimme comfort.
A personal piece, suffice it to say. I wrote a very flimsy skeleton to it a few weeks ago, and adapted it into a nested villanelle, a form created by ~jswebb. See here for the template: [link] Critique is more than welcome.

For those interested, every time I sat down to work on or revise this piece I had playing in the background: Dire Straits - Telegraph Road.

Shelter© 2012 Nic Swaner
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IyraEMM's avatar
This has a very vivid mood.. And you have a delicious vocabulary!