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I'm sick of the pills
and I'm sure they're sick of me,

but why resist when it's easier to swallow?
Written 11/01/2012

Part of the Bitlets project.

About this Bitlet

~This is my mantra, this is my pill. This is a contra-diction within itself~ I came up with the last line about five years ago and have never found a written piece to fit it into, so well, it found a place here. But in all seriousness, this depressing phrase is what keeps me taking my antidepressants. Irony's my *****. This piece may need revision though, it's a little too simple and plain for the subject matter in my opinion.

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Bitlets are about quantity, not quality. Free-write at least one a day about what is on your mind, going on around you, or the state of your life. Ignore the urge to edit; it's not about being profound on purpose, it's about stumbling on it by accident.

Bitlets 7 © 2012 Nic Swaner

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MartinSilvertant Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
Really clever word play here.
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therainontheirparade Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
This is really good. Short and powerful, I love pieces like this.

I think it's really well done, sometimes less is more. Keeps you wondering. And hits closer too home.

Once again, really well done!
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Nichrysalis Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! =)
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